My goal for this paper is to write something that people can enjoy reading. I want it to be attention grabbing from the first sentence until the last. I want this paper to have flow as well. I think that flow is important in a paper because if a paper doesn’t have flow then it probably won’t be good to read. To get my paper from where it is now to the supreme paper I hope it will be I am going to first read it allowed to myself. This is important because I will be checking that the paper sounds the way that I want it to. If I feel like something sticks out in a abnormal way then reading it allowed will help me to catch that early on in my revision process. The second thing that I will check will be the transitions between my paragraphs. I usually struggle to make smooth effortless transitions that can link my current thought to what I want to move on to next. The last thing that I am going to check for is that if my essay builds on itself. My biggest challenge is linking the work that we have read and watched in class to my paper. I don’t want to have a paper that is forcing including the work that I need to have in my paper. This breaks up the flow and makes for an ugly paper. I think that If I run into any problems that I don’t know how to solve I will send an Email to my professor because she was very informative the last time that we were reviewing our papers.
Sounds like you have a plan. Consider revisiting the They Say/ I Say chapter on transitions as you focus on flow. A reverse outline can also help you see how your paper moves from idea to idea (A quick and easy way to “zoom out”: Cut and paste your thesis into a new document, followed by every claim sentence).
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